Just Looking

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Wednesday, 20-Jul-2005 20:19:30

As I was sitting across the yard I looked and I saw the most beautiful creature walk along the sidewalk. His eyes were dark and myterious, his hair was the same color as dark chocolate, he was tall about six foot one. I just remember looking at him and watching my senses go wild. I thought of us rolling around on white sheets, I thougt of a wedding day, us on the beach and us at our fiftieth anaveriory, and then I blinked. he was gone everything I just saw in my head was gone. and we will never be but I was just looking.

Post 2 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Thursday, 21-Jul-2005 6:40:42

Wow that is beautiful. I like it.

Post 3 by Aragorn (Veteran Zoner) on Thursday, 21-Jul-2005 8:03:28

I like this one immensely. I think you ought to definitely maybe expand on it.

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 21-Jul-2005 11:39:38

Sumptuous but understated and wonderful!